I wonder what you intend
It’s work exploring
why some do cry
when contrasted with the emptiness
of the dark
needing a close reading
to be a successful piece,
nicely unusual,
you try to be consistent
in simply saying
the unsubstantial opinions
of how you feel.
It’s work exploring
why some do cry
when contrasted with the emptiness
of the dark
needing a close reading
to be a successful piece,
nicely unusual,
you try to be consistent
in simply saying
the unsubstantial opinions
of how you feel.
very good stuff.
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